tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post2416849883422609757..comments2023-12-02T10:59:43.251-08:00Comments on Cia's Stories: Wednesday Briefs: One Night Part 26Alicia Nordwellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-2551412519002430882013-06-26T12:32:26.520-07:002013-06-26T12:32:26.520-07:00Ahh, but that's part of it. I didn't want ...Ahh, but that's part of it. I didn't want to him to redeem himself. He's an ass. He doesn't get it. He didn't get it really when he did it to Bear. Jimmy's all about 'I know what should happen and anything else is stupid'. I was trying to keep him in character. Still, I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the story. Thanks so much for commenting Geemeedee!Alicia Nordwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-29126508986236436192013-06-26T12:03:03.861-07:002013-06-26T12:03:03.861-07:00I enjoyed the story, but the ending bothered me, b...I enjoyed the story, but the ending bothered me, because Jimmy never apologized. He didn't even seem to understand why they were upset. And then Kameron and Bear were supposed to just ... get over it? The invite to have Jimmy help in a move surprised me, too. They did all the giving and Jimmy just took, without truly acknowledging his cold deception. geemeedeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17631213265685729492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-9115188111706230962013-06-26T07:17:38.491-07:002013-06-26T07:17:38.491-07:00I did too! But, all good things must end, yes. I a...I did too! But, all good things must end, yes. I already have plans for my next story though, which I hope will make people happy!Alicia Nordwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-22936458184455375392013-06-26T04:42:22.865-07:002013-06-26T04:42:22.865-07:00I loved these guys. :) I'm sad to see it end. ...I loved these guys. :) I'm sad to see it end. But all good things must come to an end. (Boy don't I sound like a sap lol)Imperfectly Humanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021036039944684339noreply@blogger.com