tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post9175495774495380360..comments2023-12-02T10:59:43.251-08:00Comments on Cia's Stories: Wednesday Briefs: One Night Part 5Alicia Nordwellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-67188130376914465512013-02-05T10:07:43.998-08:002013-02-05T10:07:43.998-08:00Stranger coincidences have been known to happen! I...Stranger coincidences have been known to happen! I do tend to induce questions with my stories, then revealing things at JUST the right time to try and make my readers go ... AHA! lol. Thanks for reading!Alicia Nordwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-50239517624935471552013-02-05T10:06:44.325-08:002013-02-05T10:06:44.325-08:00Almost is now! Sorry Dawn, lol. Almost is now! Sorry Dawn, lol. Alicia Nordwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-67485745799332279072013-02-05T10:06:23.734-08:002013-02-05T10:06:23.734-08:00Thanks Mann. You never know, was it an accident? I...Thanks Mann. You never know, was it an accident? Is someone after Kam? Is Bear still a target? Hmm... so much to come still! :D <br />Alicia Nordwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-40800245933595200092013-02-05T10:02:40.053-08:002013-02-05T10:02:40.053-08:00Yeah, at the moment. There will be quite a bit of ...Yeah, at the moment. There will be quite a bit of excitment when Bear goes to confront Kameron though. :P Alicia Nordwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-74820209466951679132013-02-05T10:01:59.099-08:002013-02-05T10:01:59.099-08:00Hi Cannd,
I have noticed that problem. I try t...Hi Cannd,<br /><br /> I have noticed that problem. I try to always keep something happening, since I believe each chapter must have an internal arc as well as slotting into the arc within the chapters before and after, benefitting the entire story. It's not always possible to keep it all full of action, but sometimes the reveals or little bits of intrigue can fill out the need to make an update exciting. You're too good at picking up story ideas though, so stop it! :P JK, guess ahead all you want! Alicia Nordwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-7169115217422486502013-02-03T21:11:49.044-08:002013-02-03T21:11:49.044-08:00Accident, late at night, could it be someone who s...Accident, late at night, could it be someone who should not have been out drinking and driving? After all Bear is a bartender. Who is really being booked? Many questions and surprises, but few answers. Nice writing with only a 1000 words to work with.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-8617019466185761542013-02-01T00:12:39.341-08:002013-02-01T00:12:39.341-08:00Is it Wednesday YET?Is it Wednesday YET?Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14239734034740454604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-49962345810310990382013-01-31T12:24:42.249-08:002013-01-31T12:24:42.249-08:00You've done a great job pacing this with the 1...You've done a great job pacing this with the 1k limit. I'm really enjoying this. Nice twist with Kameron's accident. Or was it an accident?... hmmm?<br /><br />I'm keeping a close eye on this one. Thanks for another great chapter.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15305129726004180688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-23566916907256071002013-01-31T06:40:52.768-08:002013-01-31T06:40:52.768-08:00That's a way to break the news to Bear. He'...That's a way to break the news to Bear. He's taking it rather well at the moment, which I assume has to do with the fact Kameron is in hospital. I'm looking forward to the next installment!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-85930145348542358682013-01-30T21:18:06.307-08:002013-01-30T21:18:06.307-08:00The risk with the 1K limit is that sometimes it fe...The risk with the 1K limit is that sometimes it feels like the story went nowhere some weeks. You consistently keep the story moving and make each week exciting which is an admirable thing...and alot of fun for the readers. You surprised me with someone targeting Kam, but I will tell ya that those cops better not have their heads so far up their asses that they put Bear so obviously at risk. That would be pretty damn dumb to tell him to leave his place and make his way to the hospital alone, leaving an opening for the ex, esp after what happened to Kam. I'd hope at least Loren would come pick him up or these guys don't deserve their badges. I love how Loren takes such good care of Bear. he's totally like a big brother. That was very cute how he threatened Kam. Can't wait for next wednesday! <br />~canndAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-37687019445620798812013-01-30T19:20:48.715-08:002013-01-30T19:20:48.715-08:00Thanks Nephy! It's hard to pace a plot with on...Thanks Nephy! It's hard to pace a plot with only 1k, yet fill everything in that I need to. Glad I could surprise you; you know how much I like twists, lol! Alicia Nordwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-56646668002922586682013-01-30T19:19:26.383-08:002013-01-30T19:19:26.383-08:00Thanks Kayla! I think Bear's going to cream a ...Thanks Kayla! I think Bear's going to cream a few big, bad cops who should be quivering in their boots, lol! I never make things too easy, never fear!Alicia Nordwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-9931991445243433012013-01-30T12:16:18.352-08:002013-01-30T12:16:18.352-08:00i enjoyed that :) It was nicely paced and exciting...i enjoyed that :) It was nicely paced and exciting. I was quite shocked about what happened to Kam because I was expecting the scary things to happen to Bear. nice. Knowing you, I'm not expecting anything next week. know better. expect the unexpected.Nephy's Worldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12677130973931453911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-73621447892162552062013-01-30T09:40:00.535-08:002013-01-30T09:40:00.535-08:00wonderful chapter. i so hope Bear gives everyone a...wonderful chapter. i so hope Bear gives everyone a piece of his mind. but in the end forgives kameron but not to easily. so much to look forward to.<br /><br />kayla<br />stonekayla49@yahoo.com<br /> Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03373145087384423642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-86569256100682504502013-01-30T08:48:18.042-08:002013-01-30T08:48:18.042-08:00Me too! LOL, so much to consider in this story. Is...Me too! LOL, so much to consider in this story. Is Vilem caught? How? How did Kameron get hurt? How hurt is he? What will Bear do? How bad is Jimmy gonna get beaten for this being his idea? I'll have more next week, definitely!Alicia Nordwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-33260564853740590202013-01-30T08:46:28.406-08:002013-01-30T08:46:28.406-08:00Yes, the world building isn't quite as intense...Yes, the world building isn't quite as intense-I have to give up some content somewhere with the 1k limit. That's one of the reasons I kept it contemporary. You'll just have to see next week to find out about Kameron and Bear. :P Thanks for reading and commenting Tali!Alicia Nordwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01874076077603097775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-82549599577700870492013-01-30T06:59:09.462-08:002013-01-30T06:59:09.462-08:00Well, I really hope the bad guy was caught. I als...Well, I really hope the bad guy was caught. I also am hoping that Kameron isn't seriously hurt. Those 2 guys, Kam and Bear, need to talk and Kam needs to come clean and tell Bear how he really feels. Hopefully Bear will be able to forgive the subterfuge and not try to kill his brother and Kam once the truth comes out.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03941124729412373516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581086669446176216.post-31231877943162063202013-01-30T06:18:43.105-08:002013-01-30T06:18:43.105-08:00Really enjoying the character interactions in this...Really enjoying the character interactions in this. I'm assuming at this point the cops caught the man they were after, but Kameron still will have to come clean with Bear about using him. No one appreciates being played. I just hope Kameron isn't seriously injured!Tali Spencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01580510151991448014noreply@blogger.com