This week brings you a series of New Year's prompts and the conclusion to Brought Home. Let me tell you, finishing this in a flash piece just 500-1000 words was not easy! I hope you guys like it though. My prompt choice was to use the words: Toast, Hangover, and Kiss.
Brought Home
What a strange man. I begged a gift bag from Maggie, Mack's
mom. I loved the surprised grin on Mack's face when he opened it and instantly
put it on.
"Thank you Jo," he whispered. I shuddered when his
soft lips touched my ear.
The arrival of Mack's mother let me look away. I cleared and
started coughing. Maggie patted my back before handing me a cup of tea.
"Drink up, lad. You'll be right as rain in no
time."
I’d no idea how to respond to mothering, so I took a long
drink. She seemed satisfied with that, smoothing the blanket over my shoulder.
"Dinner will be ready soon."
I yawned, being sick sucked. I finished my tea, grimacing at
the sweet honey. Mack plucked my cup from my hand, then put my head in his lap.
I was surprised but when his hand started sliding through my hair, I decided I
didn't care. The headache from all the sinus pressure eased as I relaxed.
"Take a nap. We're gonna watch the game." Another
surprise, Mack's dad came in and sat down in the chair without saying a word.
Like my head in Mack's lap was nothing.
What a strange family … but I think I liked them almost as
much as I did Mack.
***
It took five days before I didn’t feel like I had a hangover.
Thankfully, I always recovered quickly and only had to use two sick days.
It was New Year's Eve and the tension between us was driving
me crazy. Mack had rubbed my head and fed me soup and medicines til I was
better.
We planned on going out to celebrate, toast a new year
together. My black jeans fit like a glove and I paired them with a clean white
t-shirt.
"Ready to party?" His black shirt made Mack’s pale
skin glow. I blinked, enjoying the way he moved as he bent over and pulled on
his shoes, and not listening at all.
I glared at him. "Don't call me that."
"Well then pay attention."
Mack walked over to me, his hips swinging. I swallowed hard.
"I asked if you were ready to go to the club."
He stood close enough I could feel the heat of his body. I’d planned
on kissing him at midnight but … I yanked Mack close, one hand on his neck and
the other against the small of his back.
"I'm tired of the teasing," I growled.
Mack raised one eyebrow. "So?"
His hoarse voice and the way his eyes darkened with need
stole my ability to speak. Mack reached under the pillow and pulled out lube
and a condom. How like my Mack.
"I wanted to be prepared, just in case."
"Now!" he gasped.
My mind shattered when I pushed into him. I was left with
scattered impressions of tight heat, a pounding rhythm and small pricks of pain
as Mack's nails dug into my ass. He demanded more and I shoved a pillow under
his ass, shifting until he shuddered and cried out. I pushed in over and over,
nailing his prostate.
He came first, my hand stroking him as I bit my cheek, trying
to hold back. He shouted my name as cum shot across his stomach and chest.
Panting, I collapsed on the bed. Mack sighed. "Why'd we wait so long to do that?" I shook my head.
"I dunno."
"Want to go again?"
Amazingly, I did. He teased me for ages. By the time the clock struck midnight we were both sweaty and sticky. I finally gave him the long, slow kiss I'd planned.
"Happy New Year."
Beautiful story! I can imagine how difficult it is to everything within a thousand words and have it all flow so well. You get major kudos!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
It can be an absolute nightmare! That's why I usually do short stories 4-8 weeks in duration, and even that can be hard! But, the challenge makes it fun at the same time. I'm glad you enjoyed my holiday flash stories!!
DeleteThat was really hot and at the same time touching. Thanks for sharing your story!
ReplyDeleteThanks Chris! I like to write in hot sex, when it fits, but at the same time I've been told they can read almost discreet. I like sweet endings, what can I say? :P
Delete"We can do the foreplay thing later." His erection was angry red and weeping. "I need you."
ReplyDeleteLove this bit! Nice short! :)
Happy New Year!
Charley
What can I say? Sometimes foreplay is just unnecessary! lol Happy New Year Charley!!
DeleteThanks, Cia, for such a heartwarming story.
ReplyDeleteReally hot awesome story
ReplyDeleteHot and sweet! I liked the way they received the new year ;-)
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