Wednesday, April 18, 2012

Hypnotic Ch. 18

Woo hoo! Party!

(yes, I'd look that spastic if I actually danced, gods I'm uncoordinated!)

I told you I was back! Hypnotic Ch. 18 is now posted on GA! It'll be combined with Ch. 17 into Ch. 9 for Literotica (confusing I know, they get 2 chapters together on that site to make them longer) and should post on there in a few days.

I hope you like it. More will be coming soon. Feel free to join GA if you want to leave a review or comment in my forum there, lol, or drop me a line here. I don't mind critiques, comments, raves (the nice kind, or I shall laugh at you, muahahahaha)... you get the picture!


  1. Uh oh... I make lots of comments on the chapters and some of em aren't always nice... I see how it is, you just laugh at me :P

    1. Pfft... you're my beta/editor. That's your JOB! Though... I'm not going to say I don't ever laugh at you, cause... well, I'd be lying! :P

  2. Ahhhhh! Love the update! And into trouble he goes again. Dav is gonna feak!


  3. Loved the chapter! So glad you gave Dav and Ellis time to be together before the shit hit the fan again. They needed to connect. And good God are they quite the couple... so hot together (I love Dav)!!

    Can't wait to see what happens next. Ellis can take care of himself... but he also doesn't have any where near the amount of experience that Dav does. It'll be interesting to see where this goes now that he's blown up at Dav and then went and walked into trouble. Poor guy can't catch a break!

  4. I'm glad you're feeling better, and that you are writing again! Great chapter, I can't wait to see what's coming next, poor Ellis and Dav just don't seem to get a break!

  5. I love these two... I can´t wait for their next aventure

  6. I'm just catching up on my reading and was so happy to see you'd put up another chapter!

  7. Your Killing me... love the chapter but why does Ellis have to be the one in trouble... and I hope you don't make me wait to long for the next one... jijii :D..

    Love your work... Hope everything it's good in your life and that the inspiration will always be there.... post soon Pleasessssssssss.

  8. Thanks for the comments everyone! I'm so glad you liked it! Writing is a lot of fun for me, and with this story and The Experiment, I'm keeping busy! More will be coming as soon as I can get it written and edited. Thanks again.

  9. I hope you get well soon. I love this story,thanks for sharing

  10. Please tell me something is coming soon. Will we get to see Matthew again? Have Ahsran and Nathan worked things out? Who has Ellis? Will Dav make it b4 he gets hurt? Great give us more! Lol, please?


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