As Natural As Breathing by Thianna D.My rating: 3 of 5 stars
I enjoyed the story, which is why I gave it 3 stars. However, it was not without its flaws. I definitely felt the 'Stepford family' vibes. The contrast between the perfect couples to the supposedly broken Christian bothered me. The parental/child knowledge of their sex lives really bugged me. Just... ew, but I guess in a true DD relationship having kids would create a wrinkle. Either it becomes bedroom related only and extremely well hidden, or it's open.
Usually I dissect exactly what I do and do not like about a story. Other than those issues though, I just felt a vague 'meh, it's a story'. I read it, I didn't feel like my time was, but it didn't really stick out. Overuse of character descriptions and a vaguely unreal feeling let me somewhat dissatisfied. I think the author would have benefited greatly from a comprehensive content review to shake up the story and make it more believable.
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